Saturday, August 29, 2009

Fifth Paragraph (Clonclusion)

I still remember when I used to imagine myself as Christine in the Phantom of the Opera play, I still enjoy the role play during classes or when I dance alone in my room. Truly, that trip changed completely my life, now I am more focused in learning languages than reading plays. I feel like I am more mature respecting what I want, and for that, I am very grateful with God.

2 comments:

  1. Wow Pily... While I was reading your essay I noticed that your english level is very high and your redaction skills aren't bad at all.

    If I'll have to grade it I'll grade it whit an A+ because I liked a lot the way that you use to refer to certain things on your life.

    Congratulation Pily

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  2. Thanks a lot Lalo for your comments, I really appreciate them!!

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